Sunday, March 28, 2010

FULL CIRCLE

I have been raised from the mud
And to the mud I’ll again return

As somewhere I may be buried
Else somewhere I will also burn

Knowledge is the guiding course
That helps in the pursuit to learn

The outcome of final destination
Will come when deeds will churn

As actions will calculate fortunes
But the process may be quite stern

That will decide upon the final fate
Into which direction steps will turn

Regardless of cultures and tribes
Lastly same shroud all will adorn

Leading to hell or to the paradise
When journey of life will adjourn

Seeking their authentic identities
If everyone will attempt to discern

And this life could be better to live
For others if we hold some concern

6 comments:

Roshani said...

I have been raised from the mud
And to the mud I’ll again return....
we never die, never buried and never burn Nayeem.
Only this body means materialistic body made from matter/elements is die.
Aur bhi bahut kuch hai jise yahan samjha pana mushkil hai.
...
By the way poem is very nice.
this line "And this life could be better to live
For others if we hold some concern" is very very nice
Take care
Thank you so much.

MOHAMMAD NAYEEM said...

quite true roshani! its beyond our knowledge and its still quite a mystery, i mean life after death, is it or is it not! still we have various theories regarding it and quite a few of us strongly believe too! so just thought to pen down few thoughts of mine regarding it, nice to know that u liked d few lines. thanks dost :)

Unknown said...

thats correct...one must do everything which he/she can do to serve the humanity..before completing this circle .. :)..

MOHAMMAD NAYEEM said...

thanks gaury! thts a better depiction :)

cuty said...

Gud buddy! keep writing...

MOHAMMAD NAYEEM said...

thanks cuty ! :)